You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete.
Write the letter to the company. In your letter:
• Explain what you ordered and what was missing from your delivery
• Explain the importance of this delivery
• Ask for a replacement item to be sent
Dear Sir,
My name is Jot and I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with my order which I placed on 9th January 2020 and the order _ id is:87545.
I order a remote control singing Barbie doll for my niece’s birthday which is about to happen on 20th January 2020. She has a special likeness for such a doll hence when I checked your website, I was lured by the featured of the doll therefore, I placed the order immediately.
I received the order on 13th January and I was very excited while opening it. On opening it, I discovered that the remote was missing and that doll of no use. I am very unhappy with the service.
My niece is very dear to me, therefore, I want to give her favorite doll as a birthday present. She always wanted to have different kinds of dolls for her toy collection.
I would like the company to replace the item as soon as possible and deliver the item before 20th January so that I can watch that happiness on her face on her birthday. Look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Jot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 41, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Barbie) must be used with a third-person verb: 'dolls'.
Suggestion: dolls
...I order a remote control singing Barbie doll for my niece’s birthday which is about ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45595854922 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51370988364 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564766839378 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9031763913 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1818181818 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151694322561 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614562108353 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426191132001 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075533833405 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389359548175 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.