In many countries in the world, some people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country. Others think that government should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A number of people in several countries are getting an exorbitant remuneration all across the globe. Although it is believed that a nation can be benefited by providing higher salaries to its citizens, others hold a conviction that an upper limit should be set by the government on the amount of wages. In my opinion, I believe that people should receive salaries as per their educational qualifications and the importance of their work.
A few people argue that if deserving professionals are paid well, talent can be retained within the country which in turn will contribute to overall development of the country. Otherwise, nation will be in urgent demand of talented people. For instance, one of my friends who is engineer by profession moved to the US because he was getting a higher pay package than his native country.
On the other hand, a number of people consider that government should decide a maximum wage because the huge difference between normal and top salaries can de-motivate workers at lower levels. Moreover, financial equality among employees at different levels keeps them motivated which in turn will improve their efficacy.
Finally, in my opinion, the salary received should solely depend on the educational background and criticality of work being performed. For example, highly qualified professionals such as engineers and scientists should be paid a hefty amount of money for their work because they are contributing to a country’s development with the invention of various groundbreaking technologies. In contrast, jobs like those of construction workers or miners do not require any special skills; hence, their wages should be set to a fixed limit.
In conclusion, many countries pay exorbitant salaries to a few employees to which some people dispute and urge the government to regulate the salaries of individuals in the country; however, I believe that the amount of pay should be decided according to the nature of the job and education of a person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19565217391 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97832563612 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.442584739 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.416666667 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226359202664 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828148517669 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598666257452 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133537271677 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573967894125 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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