Some people believe that the government should ban smoking in all public areas, while others say that it will restrict basic freedoms. Do you agree or disagree?
Public authorities have been playing a significant role in human societies. Some people
believe that smoking should be prohibited in public areas even if citizen’s freedom would be
reduced. I strongly agree with this statement since I consider human right on friesh air to be more valuable.
During smoking, people fill the air with a gas which can cause an indirect damage to nearby
people’s health. Smokers are protected because most cigarettes have a special filter to secure it’s
user from poisoning substances. However, people outside are more vulnerable since they do not clear air while breathing. According to recent studies, pasive smokers are more likely to get cancer due to impure air they inhale. In other words, people in public places who do not smoke absorb more toxins, that lead to their health issues.
Smokers also provide bigger expences for urban environment maintenance, causing trash
bin fire and producing more garbage on streets. People usually throw a hot cigarette in a trash can, which may lead to a fire and a destroyed container that should be replaced. On top of that, men tent to miss and leave butts on the ground, which require an additional cleaning of public places. For example, Germany reported that it’s local authorities were able to reduce the amount of staff after public smoking became prohibited. Thus, ciggarettes outside private property enlarge local budgets,which are subsidised by non smokers as well.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with the restriction of public smoking because other’s people health and money are also involved without their permission.
- Today the internet has created that chance for ordinary people to become famous Is it a positive or negative development 61
- Nowadays environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual persons In other words it is a governmental problem Do you agree or disagree 11
- The mass media including television radio and newspapers have great influence in shaping people s ideas To what extent do you agree or disagree 92
- In the future it will become more difficult to live on Earth so more money should be spent researching how to live on other planets such as Mars do you agree or disagree 73
- High salary is more important than job satisfaction Do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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...areas even if citizen’s freedom would be reduced. I strongly agree with this stat...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'indirect damage'.
Suggestion: indirect damage
...fill the air with a gas which can cause an indirect damage to nearby people’s health. Smokers ar...
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...h can cause an indirect damage to nearby people’s health. Smokers are protected b...
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Message: Did you mean 'to secure its user'?
Suggestion: to secure its user
...e most cigarettes have a special filter to secure it’s user from poisoning substances. However, peo...
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Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?
Suggestion: its
...arettes have a special filter to secure it’s user from poisoning substances. Howev...
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...tes have a special filter to secure it’s user from poisoning substances. However,...
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Message: Did you mean 'its local authorities'?
Suggestion: its local authorities
...ces. For example, Germany reported that it’s local authorities were able to reduce the amount of staff...
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Suggestion: , which
...e private property enlarge local budgets,which are subsidised by non smokers as well. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in other words, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32046332046 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63671230045 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644787644788 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.0087990848 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.4285714286 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219283546928 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718054179024 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080176605797 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899945066881 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722121280581 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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