You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend.
In your letter:
• say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
• explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
• suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Ridhi,
How are you? Hope this letter finds you well and I am writing this in response to your letter asking about advice on whether to join a job or continue to study further.
As far as my knowledge, I know you are interested in doing practical work instead of writing long homework assignments hence, as per my opinion you should join a job. Additionally, I know that you want to study business entrepreneurs and so I think this will give you an opportunity to closely analyze the market demand.
I have directly joined the university for my further studies without analyzing anything and the result is I have not got my desired job still. Therefore, with my experience, I can certainly say that this drop will be valuable for your further higher studies. This will teach you critical thinking skills, time management, communication skills, and especially presentation skills, moreover, open doors for better future opportunities.
I feel that you should join as a customer care representative in any retail company or any hotel because it will make you interact will different kinds of people and know the customer concerns. This will definitely benefit in future jobs and higher studies.
I hope you would like my advice and write me back if there is any other concern.
Warm Regards,
Jot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, i feel, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1100.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97737556561 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79306866564 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628959276018 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.9819008523 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231240344028 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903449085118 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074668633867 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147705358747 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087827110879 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.