Dear Alen,
Greetings for the day!
I am Hamen, a student of management. I have been taking evening classes at your prestigious institute for last few months. Unfortunately, i will have to off this course even from this week for two months.
Actually, as you know, I am also working part-time in one IT company. Luckily, they have decided to promote me, and also moving in full-time job. They are going to send me Delhi, in their head office, for internship of 2 months. So, for this time period, I will stay there.
I am really glad to hear this news. I would like to attend classes when i will come back, after completing my training because this course is also useful further in future. My job demands such skills which are only possible to develop by this management course.
I would be thankful to you, if you extend my fee that have been paid for my next batch.
Your faithfully,
Hamen Gupta
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ute for last few months. Unfortunately, i will have to off this course even from ...
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Line 4, column 62, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
..., I am also working part-time in one IT company. Luckily, they have decided to promote ...
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Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ws. I would like to attend classes when i will come back, after completing my tra...
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Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ause this course is also useful further in future. My job demands such skills which are o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55828220859 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45277577434 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.693251533742 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2594275231 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.9166666667 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5833333333 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252062336152 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834951975405 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589192686439 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112549512385 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061809831716 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.