Countries should provide enough food for their own people and therefore lessen exportation of food
abroad, if needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Undoubtedly, many countries are exporting food products to other countries, while their own citizenry are deprived of it. I cogitate that nations should cut down their export of foodstuff if their denizens are need of it, because the privation of food stocks would bring inflation in the economy and it is one of the fundamental onus of the government to cater the nutritional requirement of underprivileged people.
Since lucrative amounts of profit gravitate the vendors to sell their food items to overseas buyers, the dwellers of exporting countries have to face scarcity of food products. Consequently, dearth of eatable items push inflation in countries and people have to pay hefty amounts to procure their food. Also it is biased to overlook the fact published by WHO that a major portion of rice in India usually export to middle east countries and Indian citizens have to buy the rice at inflated price. Therefore, in order to bring the rising prices under absolute control the authorities should firstly meet the domestic demands and then, export the surplus food.
To continue, every nation has its own poverty level and there will be thousands of people are struggling for a meal every day Seemingly, being a rudimentary accountability of statutory bodies, first of all they should ensure that whether the dietary requirement of their own country has been catered or not? Starvation and malnutrition are one of the burning issues which is not fully alleviated by authorities. To exemplify, as per the report stated by Time Magazine, in the previous year, Pakistan is one of the top exporters of wheat but the deficiency of foodstuff in local markets always leads to turmoil.
In conclusion, although intensive farming has proliferated the yield, the authorities should control the burgeoning cost of eatables due to unavailability of food items. Instead of export, government should firstly focus to endow adequate supply of food to the poor section.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, look, so, then, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20376175549 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87245879793 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598746081505 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.2081615902 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.909090909 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305033177165 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112933826226 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638821980316 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176970366104 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481043139243 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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