You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish.
Write a letter to the admissions tutor:
explain your position
apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day.
ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Samvedna Puri, dweller of Queen Street, North London. I am inscribing this epistle to make an sincere apology for the invitation i have received from you for the interview on 15th of june at 11:00 am when i will be unable to present . This is because such dates are contradicting with my consultation date with a doctor.
Since, it has been one month that i met with an horrible accident, thus my physiotherapist advised me to visit his clinic fornightly at 11:00 am.I would be grateful if you could allow me with other possible alternative dates as per your convenience or grant me permission to visit on same day at lateral hours.
Even though i am well aware regarding the content of the course, kindly communicate me the necessary information such as duration of interview. Moreover, whether institution is going to conduct any kind of entrance test to reserve the seat.
I anticipate to hear a prompt and positive response from your end.
Your Sincerely,
Samvedna Puri.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...n. I am inscribing this epistle to make an sincere apology for the invitation i ha...
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Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...erview on 15th of june at 11:00 am when i will be unable to present . This is bec...
^
Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...1:00 am when i will be unable to present . This is because such dates are contradi...
^^
Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...r. Since, it has been one month that i met with an horrible accident, thus my ...
^
Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
..., it has been one month that i met with an horrible accident, thus my physiotherap...
^^
Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...visit his clinic fornightly at 11:00 am.I would be grateful if you could allow me...
^
Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e day at lateral hours. Even though i am well aware regarding the content of ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, thus, well, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90804597701 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84181028823 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.712643678161 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.0456237407 44.8134815571 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143104560968 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514879520104 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519141915879 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750657704483 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407279996981 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.