You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor:
- explain your position
- apologize and offer to come on another day or later the same day.
- ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thank you for inviting me to the college interview for selection in the master's course of Data Science in your prestigious college. However, I am afraid that I will not be available on the same day because of my appointment with the physiotherapist.
I have to visit the hospital because of the fracture in my left arm on the interview's date as I already took a date of meeting last three weeks ago. They have to remove the fracture and check my arm which got affected by the accident from falling off the stairs. Therefore, I would not be able to attend my selection interview for master's at your university.
By all means, I want to pursue the master's course and if there is any chance to schedule my interview appointment for a day before or a day after. I would be grateful, if you will conduct my interview before or after's the interview's date as per your feasible time.
Moreover, could you tell me the other details of the interview selection such as time duration and any tests to clear before proceeding with the final interview with the head of department and university's registrar. I will be thankful to you by providing me the other details which needs to be done before the interview, so, that I can prepare with my best performance.
I will be glad if you will accept my request for another date to give an interview at the college. I am hoping to hear a positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 100, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...te to give an interview at the college. I am hoping to hear a positive response. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, such as, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 258.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65891472868 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76441108225 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515503875969 0.622605031667 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 379.8 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.8100988867 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.166666667 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23200535238 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092968540911 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515320775319 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144137398233 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038748269535 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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