A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress.What should people do to stay healthy in your country?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Undoubtedly, populace of ever-progressing era have trapped in never ending race where oftenly they lack to look after for their selves. Thus, prudent way is the blend of nutritious food and ample physical activities to marginalise distress. This essay adamantly asserts that balanced diet cater the requirements of human body and excercise assist in keeping energetic.
Even though ready made food is highly demanded by consumers across the globe due to easy availability at cheap price, deleterious effects associated with it are usually forgotten. Seemingly, the idle meal is one which contains micro as well macro nutrients which mostly constitute carbohydrates, protein, fat, vitamins and minerals that undenibaly required for corporal development. Therefore, people need to divert towards good eating habits which ensures the smooth functioning of body otherwise involved harmful substances in unhygenic consumable items can lead to critical health related aliments. Japan is the only country where life expectancy rate is high such as 85 years old due to the healthy eating manners of dwellers who prefer to eat low calorie food.
Although the technical advancement is not less than a worship for mankind but it is also purely accountable for sedentary lifestyle which make individuals prone to distinct life threatening disorders. Here, the prominent role of work out kicks in that it is condcutive in improving the circulation of blood and help in channelizing the energy in constructive purposes.Furthermore, practice of Yoga and meditation are playing imperative position in alleviating the anxiety. It would be biased to overlook the data published by World Health Organisation stating that fitness centres are becoming emerging businesses as getting huge fame among the youngsters who are well aware about the importance of fit life.
To conclude, the hybird combination of both is an impeccable measure to maintain the delegacy of physical and mental health to a sustain healthy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 369, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...ing the energy in constructive purposes.Furthermore, practice of Yoga and meditation are pl...
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Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...legacy of physical and mental health to a sustain healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, thus, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5487012987 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0742124475 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.711038961039 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.0837767524 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.363636364 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0784977231668 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0249955901723 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0195247858055 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.041962541349 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00738040461919 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.23 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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