TASK 2 : Governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move from large cities to regional areas. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages of damaging such areas?
These days, in many countries are giving many opportunities and welfares for industries and businesses in order to enhance their economy. Although, encouraging them to relocate to remote areas still provoke debates. While this tendency has several drawbacks, I hold an opinion that they could never dominate the benefits for the following reasons.
On the one hand, people who are against this may argue that this can be damaged to industries. Firstly, most of rural areas are lacking of communication and transportation system. Many sociologists have shown that the core difference between urban area and countryside is the missing of facilities like internet connection or highways. Furthermore, firms and industries are laid on delivery service and this can be a huge obstacle. Secondly, there will be a gap in recruiting and keeping the work force. Nowadays, skillful employees are often being hunted and they move from small towns to big cites as a regular basis in order to have a promising career path and more employment opportunities. This will lead to a pressure for industries that they have to deal with.
On the other hand, notwithstanding the above-mentioned drawbacks, I would argue that it will be such some potential benefits will eclipse the harms. This policy can directly tackle the demographic problem. The huge amount of numbers of companies in big cities can be seen as a huge magnet and under the eyes of workers in remote areas, this is absolutely appealing. And the consequence is that a number of people will leave their place to transfer to big cites, and this will end up by putting high pressure on public services, pollution and criminal issue. Although, it is really hard to recognize but the migration tendency can be stopped by supplying countryside by job opportunities. Another advantage is that the less competitive market can be beneficial to the firms and moreover is the support comes from the authorities. While the financial capital is the most crucial part to any industry, first step or crisis period can lead all the companies to the race of finding public funding or mortgage in urban cities. So that, moving to remote areas can be a solution thanks to the expansion fiscal policy.
In conclusion, although there are some disadvantages of transferring to remote areas for industries and businesses, but, its advantages will eclipse its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, still, while, as for, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2026.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16836734694 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96127213425 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55612244898 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1691897928 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.631578947 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6315789474 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21052631579 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146848200081 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453872889362 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447620237659 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103007461976 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314031963895 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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