"After high school, a choice that many students have to make is whether to go to college and university or not. The decision that will give people the better opportunity to have a more successful life is to go to college and university. In most people's opinions, obtaining a university degree is the best way to get success in life."
Write an essay to educated readers to give your opinion about this trend. Include reasons and relevant examples to support your answer.
You should write at least 250 words.
It is believed that enrolling as a student in an educational institution after graduating from high school would be utterly best for senior students to have successful career in the future. In my opinion, this idea is completely flawed and there are several feasible alternatives.
We cannot deny that entering university or college is somehow beneficial to students. Academy will present them with a methodical and systematic training program which not only enables them to gasp the fundamental knowledge but also gradually helps them to master their fields of major. Also, being instructed by well-qualified lecturers at educational institutes is a valuable opportunity for undergraduates to gain more tips and precious experience. Moreover, if they get a university degree, they will possibly have more occasions to become a competent candidate in the job market since it is a basic document proving their capability and skills.
However, there are myriad ways to achieve success without obtaining a university degree. Instead of budgeting thousands of dollars on tuition fees, many people choose to use this measure of money to start up and invest in their own businesses and finally reach notable accomplishment. A typical example in this case is Michael Dell, a founder and CEO of Dell Corporation. He dropped out of college at 19, but he gradually developed a small original company into a thriving corporation with just a few loan from his family. Another reason for many students do not choose to be trained at university and college is that they are inherently able to pursue their dreams and that learning at those educational organisations is not worth their time and efforts. For instance, there is no course in university training them to be a good youtuber or an excellent orator.
In brief, although going to college and university can produce many benefits, it is not the only path leading academic learners to success. The key point here is every single student should work out what they actually need and who they would become in order to make a wise choice for their prospects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tution after graduating from high school would be utterly best for senior student...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al example in this case is Michael Dell, a founder and CEO of Dell Corporation. H...
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Line 3, column 498, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun loan seems to be countable; consider using: 'few loans'.
Suggestion: few loans
...into a thriving corporation with just a few loan from his family. Another reason for man...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in brief, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11337209302 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89456507324 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622093023256 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5712710081 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.642857143 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249000377324 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073368348111 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582320790911 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139178026858 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167432829775 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.