You are going on holiday and would like to stay in the same hotel as you did on your last visit.
Write to hotel
Explain why yu have choosen to viist the same hotel
Give them the detail of your stay
Ask them about any events in the area during the your stay.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am john, dweller of Huston street U.S.A, penning down this epistle to convey my thanks for the offer to come and address the students of my former school. It would be privilege for me to give a talk and see the old place again. The invitation was quite open regarding the topic of speech, thus I am in dilemma whether you think it is appropriate to talk about my career.
As I have spent a considerable time working as a Chief Financial Officer of numerous transnational incorporation, thus I have vast experience of working with blue chip companies. Therefore, I have plethora of pragmatic experience which I can use in the presentation. It would be highly appreciable if you let me know about the approximate time that I should expect to be speak for. I would be grateful if you tell me about the estimated number of students, so that I can arrange a projector to make this presentation more meaningful.
I am eagerly waiting for your reply so that I can draft my speech accordingly.
Your faithfully
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 41, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...I am john, dweller of Huston street U.S.A, penning down this epistle to convey my...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 858.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68852459016 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92772790258 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622950819672 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.5553160914 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.25 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10705033677 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547191699386 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438085130121 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614060072642 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154957495436 0.0580467560999 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.