Nowadays a large amount of advertising aiming at children should be banned because of the negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the recent years, the impact of a growing number of advertisements can be seen on people, particularly on the youngsters. Indeed, most ads are made to target children, as they are vulnerable to get get influenced quickly. In my opinion, not all advertisements affects adversely, rather are made for the purpose.
Advertisements of various products are gaining popularity these days. Many hold the negative view about the commercials telecasted during daily shows. They are being objected to contain scenes which children should not perceive. For instance, adverts relating to taking drugs, although, the message imparted is positive, yet the images are sensitive for children to watch. Contrary to this, advertising about such information, not only spreads awareness, but also creates fear in the young mind and directs them to take the right path in life.
Another argument put forward in support of my point, is myriad of commercials aim to educate the tender mind about multiple products and services available in the market. Such marketing strategy simply helps children to be more sensible while making their choices. Indeed, there are a number of advertisements, which offer their products in attractive packaging to lure youngsters and try to lay a trap to target them. However, there are companies who before presenting the product, define their purpose well. As in the case of Handwash and other soaps, so that children can understand its value before even using it.
To sum up, not all advertisements leave a negative impact on kids. Companies are now in constant competition and hence understand the value of their customers. It is therefore necessary to have a broader perspective of todays adverts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26909090909 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90580723767 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625454545455 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0624426605 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5625 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126653060599 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393525123732 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353240431239 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0718308547518 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234222188733 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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