Undoubtedly, telecommunication has changed the mode of working for employees. Trend for performing office task at home is tremendously increasing. Some experts believe job from home has more benefits for companies while others are against the view. I will discuss both positive and negative aspects for organisations.
There are plethora of benefits append with pfdice job at home. To begin with, as employee spent more time at home bonding with family increases. Family members start supporting and motivate employee in case of job pressure. People are a bit more comfortable sitting at home as per their convenience and choice. They can do much of the household work along with job like coocking, purchasing grocery, dusting at home, etc. Many office goers choose part-time job to work sitting at home for taking care of their children, parents and pregnant wife. Viewing family members in front of them and spend time helps increasing overall productivity of the company.
Many organisations like Wipro, Genpact, etc, have started hiring for a part-timer jobs with work from home offer. Performing on a laptop from home reduces investment cost of purchasing ofdice space and mantainance. Saved money can be used for improving technological development.
However, their are various drawbacks for doing office task at home. Firstly, it hampers the coordination among employees as they feel ackward disturbing anyone in odd time. Secondly, concentration of doing work geta effected as they are physically present at home. Most of the time, employee is not available or busy doing personal work at home when called for the video conferencing. Team spirit gets effected resulting less target achieved and overall functioning of the department.
To conclude, working from home spaces improves family relation but declines companies growth and lack of coordination among the staff members.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 501, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to work sitting at home for taking care of their children, parents and pregnant ...
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Line 3, column 610, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to increase' or 'increase'.
Suggestion: to increase; increase
...s in front of them and spend time helps increasing overall productivity of the company. ...
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Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...technological development. However, their are various drawbacks for doing office ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43389830508 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88859708257 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620338983051 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.0119853716 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.15 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204309275421 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688813862841 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504190892097 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122088510912 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158374627555 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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