Today boarding schools are becoming more and more popular in many countries. Some people think this is a positive trend in the modern world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Now boarding schools have become increasingly popular in many countries，I totally agree that it is a positive trend in modern society，the reasons are as following.
The best part of living in a boarding school is that each student is taught to be independent and to take care of his own needs. in modern society, each family usually has only one child, only children are easily to get spoiled is that whatever parents have to give, the only child gets it all. but if these children go to boarding school, their independence can be fostered because they have to do everything
themselves, like washing their own clothes and waking up by themselves.
Another advantage is that all children get equal attention and get the same benefits and follow the same lifestyle.All good boarding schools give maximum attention to overall development of a student in all aspects of emotional，physical，academic or sport，boarding schools are 24 hours ，intentional communities created with the student’s growth and development at the center.
In conclusion,as boarding school may provide many benefits to the children,not only good for their independence but also their study,so I think boarding school is a positive trend in modern society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37755102041 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.57488171254 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602040816327 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.0530285755 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.666666667 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6666666667 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202968643099 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119024557816 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108279637225 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131049570615 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116712892478 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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