Topic 18/5/19: Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Advertising is undeniably ubiquitous in people’s daily lives so some argue that it has a positive influence on the society. However, I would strongly oppose to this idea and believe that its drawbacks outweigh the benefits.
It is true that adverts bring about some advantageous aspects for the viewers. When buyers come across information about new products available in the market, they can certainly be more informed, which helps them compare the prices to make the most economical purchases. For instance, on Facebook, there are sponsored contents for many clothes shops, showing their new arrivals and consumers could easily check them out. Additionally, retailers are likely to benefit from advertisements in the way that they are able to introduce the variety of goods and deals attached. As a result, there are higher chances that stores will be packed with buyers and eventually make more profits.
However, most of the time, adverts are just unwanted information for viewers. TV shows and videos on social media are disrupted by frequent product placements and adverts. These advertisements are always irrelevant to the shows’ content and discouraging for watchers who wish to finish their videos in piece. Besides, advertising helps promote consumerism due to unwise shopping decisions. Take shopping online as an example, buyers now have access to thousands shopping platforms and just by clicks on their computers, they can order commodities to be delivered to their doors. Nevertheless, this leads to the tendency to make regrettable purchases in an impulsive manner and consumers could end up buying redundant products.
To sum up, even though adverts can provide buyers with helpful information about new goods and promotions, they are disturbing and causing consumers to buy unnecessary things. Therefore, I would say that the disadvantages have more serious consequences compared to the benefits.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 651, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an impulsive manner" with adverb for "impulsive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... tendency to make regrettable purchases in an impulsive manner and consumers could end up buying redun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, nevertheless, so, therefore, for instance, as a result, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47651006711 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90626500673 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61744966443 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9270645084 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.8 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0824402353645 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308994781653 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484042398413 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0583738543508 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445708414808 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 651, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an impulsive manner" with adverb for "impulsive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... tendency to make regrettable purchases in an impulsive manner and consumers could end up buying redun...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, nevertheless, so, therefore, for instance, as a result, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47651006711 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90626500673 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61744966443 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9270645084 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.8 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0824402353645 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308994781653 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484042398413 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0583738543508 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445708414808 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.