4. Some people think that government should not give international aid since they have disadvantages people like unemployment and homeless in their own country.
To what extent do u you agree or disagree?
In recent decades, international aid has been receiving a great deal of media attention around the world due to its substantial impacts on the economic development of many countries. Although the idea of focusing on helping unemployment and homeless people should be prioritized appears reasonable, this cannot be viewed as the reason for a country to give up on international aid.
There are a number of reasons why all nations should fund international aid area. Firstly, since people have been facing with a great deal of global pandemic over the past few decades, especially SAR-1, H1N1 and Covid-19, healthcare workers and scientists are cooperating to find the solutions thanks to international aid. For example, by sending hospital equipment such as face masks and sanitizers to assist America, Vietnam has been receiving great deal attention of media around the world, which benefits not only economic growth but also a political aspect. Secondly, by sending international aid, countries are easy to enhance their relationships with the ones receiving their supports. This means that when supporting nations need bits of help, they would be supported as much as possible, which directly benefits the nations in the long run.
In addition, unemployment and homeless issues should not be the reasons for giving up on international help. First of all, if international aid is usually offered in emergency situations such as global diseases, unemployment and homeless are on-going issues that need to be solved in a long period of time such as 5 years or 10 years. This means that a country cannot wait until they slow down unemployment and homeless rates before sending aid to others. Moreover, since international aid needs a large number of volunteers, governments and corporations should take steps to encourage their citizens, especially unemployment ones, to become volunteers. For example, training programs for jobless and homeless people should be provided free and frequently as they can update information and obtain as much as the knowledge that they need, which directly helps them finding out the meaning of being volunteers.
In conclusion, international aid should be considered as one of the important actions of all countries around the world as homeless and unemployment issues would be dealt with by offering proper training. Therefore, it is necessary for governments to be able to solve these issues at once.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2054.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32124352332 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99703648807 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525906735751 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.4200420105 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.714285714 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5714285714 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264861335047 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104951684892 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601608503176 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174400391461 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489488905958 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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