The mobile phone is one of the greatest gifts of technology that people have received. Nowadays, which play an important role in human's life bring not only advantages but also disadvantages
We carry a mobile phone everywhere so it is becoming a significant thing for everyone. We have to admit that using mobile phones have plenty of benefits. First and foremost, we can connect to everyone easily. Due to the increase of the internet, we can keep in touch with our families and friends. We could know how their lives are through social media. Especially, we do not need to pay money because everything is free on social media, so we could text, call others without paying any fee. Secondly, the mobile phone is a means of entertainment. We can relax after a hard-working day by playing games, watching movies, and listening to music. Moreover, the mobile phone is used as a high-tech tool which supports our studies. We could find any information easily by using it. If we want to study English, the mobile phone is very useful to help us connect to the English community so that our English will be improved quickly.
Whereas the mobile phone also has a lot of disadvantages. Firstly, it makes people more distant. We depend on mobile phone excessively. Instead of going out and facing to face with our friends, we tend to stay at home and call or chat with them on social media. Therefore, the relationship which is kept on social media is easily broken because of far from the eye, far from the heart. Besides that, we could easily get addicted to using a mobile phone. We know that a mobile phone is created not only as a means of communication but also as a means of entertainment. It helps people reduce stress so using a mobile phone is happier than studying or working. We can spend most of our time surfing the internet which brings a harmful effect on our health.
In conclusion, we could not deny the advantages which mobile phone brings to our lives and accept that everything always has negative sides including a mobile phone. What we should do is that we should use a mobile phone reasonably and effectively. We should balance the time for relaxing and working and know what we need to do on the mobile phone instead of rejecting the mobile phone because it also has many benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t our English will be improved quickly. Whereas the mobile phone also has a lot of disa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65601965602 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60297813543 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488943488943 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 5.43587174349 313% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.7680273881 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9583333333 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9583333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323460153161 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114156581183 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937155360522 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23245345577 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496243000886 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.