Nowadays as women and men have to work full time household duties should be equally divided Do you agree or disagree

People always argue whether or not a woman or man should take responsibility for doing housework in the modern world. In my opinion, household duties should be equally divided for both husband and wife
We have a lot of reasons why both husband and wife should share household duties with each other. First and foremost, everyone who always has their goals want to spend time improving their careers. We are living in a world where equal sex is heightened. A woman can work as a man, go to school, and take part in political issues. Therefore, everyone needs to have and enjoy their lives. Besides that, sharing homework between husband and wife is a way to deal with financial problems. They can have more time to work full time and try to promote their works so that they can make more money to make their lives be materially adequate. If a family wants to exist, they need to meet a demand for material things. Finally, sharing housework help to maintain married life. They can make a comfortable atmosphere in their house so they can enjoy every moment together and become closer than before. Expert says that in a family in which a husband accepted to share homework with a wife is maintain longer than another family.
In conclusion, although we have a lot of arguments about this problem, we need to admit that household duties are the important thing which can break a family or make every member of families draw nearer together. Sharing homework for both husband and wife is very necessary to keep married life and make everyone be happier than before.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
People always argue whether or not a woman or man should take responsibili...
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Line 2, column 518, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...oblems. They can have more time to work full time and try to promote their works so that ...
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Line 2, column 985, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'maintained'.
Suggestion: maintained
...cepted to share homework with a wife is maintain longer than another family. In conclu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71167883212 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39361808434 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536496350365 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8798341723 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2142857143 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181548276166 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537259791549 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683168873409 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141737948874 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595466105931 0.056905535591 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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