Today more people are travelling than ever before.Why is this the case?What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler?
Thanks to technology growth, transporting systems make people’s life more convenient. Using airways, trains, roads and ferries are becoming popular options for travelers. Furthermore, enjoyable moments in journeys never would not be forgotten.
By inventing wheels, fundamental changes took place in human beings life. Therefore, they would be able to do their works faster than past through the coaches, vehicles and bicycles. Civilization, made transporting easier. Furthermore, public transportation systems in cities and between them have encouraged people to use them. There is a competitive atmosphere among transporting companies in order to absorb more customers by increasing and improving their facilities. Also, automobile manufactures by adding extra options to their products and constructing more comfortable cars are increasing clients’ safety, and people are persuaded to select car option among other travel systems.
Another issue can be the lifestyle. Living in apartment and working in big cities that traffics, noises and air pollution are bothering problems, cause people to have a travel to indulge. However, in past people used to live in peace more than now because population was dispersed all over the world and not only in the big cities, and houses were not in the form of apartment. Therefore, people preferred to stay at their houses and enjoy their lives.
The major impact that a travel can have is to help release daily stresses and clean mind from every negative thoughts. Furthermore, every city and country have their traditions and cultures, and travel helps to be aware of different customs. Also, finding new friends among tour members or from host countries can be a fortune in life.
All in all, life conditions make us think more about traveling and technology helps to put our thoughts in practice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
...fundamental changes took place in human beings life. Therefore, they would be able to ...
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Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'travel'.
Suggestion: travel
...othering problems, cause people to have a travel to indulge. However, in past people use...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45486111111 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8535308666 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628472222222 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6766837165 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4117647059 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64705882353 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186480034953 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521842492363 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469770523217 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104955357926 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226166561162 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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