Write a letter to your friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged.
Apologize for damaging the product.
Explain what happened.
Say how are you going to solve the issue.
Dear Emily,
Hope you are doing fine, I am sorry that you didn’t hear from me for a while. Actually I wanted to write to you a couple of days ago. Your laptop which I borrowed last week for my project got damaged by me accidentally. I am so sorry, as I know you have all your important documents in it.
I was working on my project on your laptop and I forgot about the glass of water beside it and accidentally spilled water on the laptop, it stopped working.
I called the electronic repairs immediately and they assured me that it will be as good as new, it is on the repairs shop and they are almost done with the repair but would be testing it, they are delivering it today after tomorrow. I will come to you as soon as I get the laptop,
Take care,
Dan.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a couple of days ago. Your laptop which I borrowed last week for my project got ...
^^^
Line 7, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... on the laptop, it stopped working. I called the electronic repairs immediate...
^
Line 7, column 235, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...are delivering it today after tomorrow. I will come to you as soon as I get the l...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 629.0 937.175257732 67% => OK
No of words: 149.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22147651007 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36850953021 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630872483221 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.9499961053 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8571428571 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206710568636 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101698329266 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663132382024 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122562273234 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12735194528 0.0580467560999 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.2 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.