Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of the car than its advantages. Do you agree or disagree
Mobile cars have more benefits on some people's lives than its cons. Also people claim that cars are hazardous and such are not needed in the society. This essay will argue why cars are vantage and its benefits in the development of the society.
People believe that there are more cons of the car than its pros. Before the invention of cars, people used animals like horses, carmel, dogs and so on for transportation. It was less risky and perilous because there was no case of accident. But when cars were invented, most death cases was a result of car accident. For example, in Nigeria, it was recorded that 60% of death cases was an outcome of car accident. Due to the damages caused by mobile cars, most people are paranoid about it.
Most people believe that mobile cars have made lives easy and less stressful. In this modern world, mobile vehicle have created jobs for people, jobs like uber, taxi and so on. With the help of ubers and taxis, people can travel to any part of the state within the country. Workers that are late for work can get a taxi or Uber to their places of work without much stress. For example, in Nigeria, taxi drivers make a minimum of five thousand naira everyday, making them self employed. From my view, I believe cars help in the growth of a country.
This essay argued that cars have more advantages than disadvantages in the society. In my opinion, the invention of cars contributed in the development of the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ts on some peoples lives than its cons. Also people claim that cars are hazardous an...
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Line 3, column 449, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...s make a minimum of five thousand naira everyday, making them self employed. From my vie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, for example, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65134099617 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2846560494 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528735632184 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 14.5922669951 49.4020404114 30% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.4117647059 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3529411765 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.17647058824 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272090060321 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101536863573 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109879657591 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192972113817 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0948831685727 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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