Nowadays, people can watch videos and films on their smartphones or tablets because of the development of technology. However, there is a fair amount of people support the idea that it is better to enjoy films in a cinema rather than to watch on personal devices. In my sentiment, I totally with this argument. This essay is going to discuss both opinions and argues why I support this argument.
On the one hand, I agree that movies could be watched from home on personal devices such as smartphones or tablets due to two reasons. Firstly, the cost to watch a film on the Internet is cheaper than the ticket in cinemas. For example, individuals only need to pay $10 per month to subscribe to Netflix, and then they can enjoy thousands of titles from Film Netflix store instead of spending $15 per movie in a cinema. Secondly, family members could seat comfortably anywhere in their home to watch movie like living room or bedroom.
Although watching movies at home is affordable and giving comfortable for some people, however, I believe, movies should be enjoyed in the cinema because of two reasons. Firstly, cinema will bring best experience for the films from sounds or images to interacted aspects. The theater always equip the huge screens with high resolution and high-end speakers that bring clear and great quality of images and sound to audiences. In addition, some 3D movies like Avatar, there is a special glass equipped in order to give better experience of watching the movie. Secondly, most of the new titles will be released in cinemas first before publishing on Internet channels like Netflix. Hence, people who are a fan of blockbuster movies can enjoy it immediately.
In conclusion, this essay discussed both views regarding watching films on personal devices and enjoying movies in cinemas. In my opinion, I am in favor of going to cinemas to enjoy movies because the reasons mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93209876543 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60223076192 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530864197531 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3950914676 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.875 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243887681888 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818177079169 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491505405122 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16068468649 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246229791221 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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