The population of most cities is growing as people move to cities to find work and new opportunities.
What problems do over population in city cause?
How can these problems be solved?
The increasing number of populations is becoming a serious issue in some of cities; this is because
individuals from rural areas are shifting to urban areas for lucrative jobs. In the looming paragraphs, I
will shed some light on the difficulties of over population in cities and repercussions of these problems.
To commence with, there are plethora of problems occurred due to over population and the most
conspicuous on is scarcity of land. In addition, every city has planned for certain number of individuals,
due to globalization; cities now have lot of opportunities which attracts the people who are living in
rural areas as well. Needless to say, over population also brings some problems like, less availability of
resources like food and transportation facilities. Moreover, one of the major causes of traffic jams and
air pollution is also over crowded cities. For example, according to an article in The Tribune in
September 2019, most of the multinational companies have their offices in Mumbai and this is perhaps
the reason why, Mumbai has become most polluted and crowded city in India.
On the other hand, there are some solutions of this problems also, firstly, government should make the
policies by which manufacturing units or companies get influenced to setup their units on the outskirts
of cities, which not only reduces the cities to become over crowded but open the door of opportunities
for the people living in rural areas also. For instance, Himachal Pradesh in India, introduced the policy of
50% subsidy in electricity bill if unit is placed outside the city and with this policy, both the people of
rural areas and companies got benefitted. Last but not the least; government should also make public
transport more convenient and available to villages so that individuals can easily commute to their work
rather than living in cities.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that if there is a lock there is a key as well, in the same way
each problem comes up with solution. All we have to do is understand the problem and shift to the best
alternative to eradicate the difficulties.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the cities') or simply say ''some cities''.
Suggestion: some of the cities; some cities
...ulations is becoming a serious issue in some of cities; this is because individuals from rura...
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Line 12, column 48, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...other hand, there are some solutions of this problems also, firstly, government shou...
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Line 13, column 67, Rule ID: CAN_SETUP[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to set up'?
Suggestion: to set up
...uring units or companies get influenced to setup their units on the outskirts of cities...
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Line 15, column 38, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...s for the people living in rural areas also. For instance, Himachal Pradesh in Indi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05322128852 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84891163418 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.4517831903 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.333333333 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.75 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276380392502 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100726590316 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545221918218 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0723303625602 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701607631352 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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