Shopping is the favorite pastime for most of the youngsters. Why do you think is
that?
Do you think they should be encouraged to do some other useful activities?
It is an irrefutable fact that everyone needed a leisure time for the peace of mind and relaxation of body
from their hectic schedules. Most of the young people like to go for shopping in their free time. In my
following paragraph I will shed some light on the reason, why shopping has become one of the most
favorite pastime among youngsters, some other ways to spend their free time.
To commence with, there are plethora of reasons behind the increasing liking for shopping and the
most conspicuous one is, youngsters wants to flaunt themselves to others in order to get attention and
reputation. Young people like to get notified and buying new clothes and accessories is perhaps the best
way to catch the attraction of other people. Needless to say, due to advancement of technology, new
and new inventions are introducing in the market and, youngsters want their electronic gadgets to be
updated which leads to buy the latest products from the market. Moreover, adults get easily fascinated
and encouraged with their favorite celebrity and, in order to adapt their favorite person’s lifestyle,
young people wants to buy the dresses as same as they saw their favorite actor wearing in the movies or
in the magazines.
On the other hand, there are some other tasks which can be enjoyed by people during their free time.
Firstly, as shopping is a wastage of money and sometimes people from destitute families cannot afford
it, so in the free time people should pull their hidden talent out and enjoy other activities like, enjoy
time with family, exercising and other activities which not only ventilates the body but rejuvenates the
mind also. Moreover, in this competitive era, every person has to be carrier oriented and to achieve the
goals people should invest their time to plan for future rather than spending money on unnecessary
shopping.
To put it in nutshell, I pen down saying that, the young age is very confusing age because this is the time
only when a person has to think about his future and present as well. Young people should shop what
they need, not to flaunt, and invest their precious time in other activities.
- In some cities and towns all over the world the high volume of traffic is a problem What are causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem 73
- The population of most cities is growing as people move to cities to find work and new opportunities What problems do over population in city cause How can these problems be solved 73
- Shopping is the favorite pastime for most of the youngsters Why do you think is that Do you think they should be encouraged to do some other useful activities 73
- One way to solve the problem of congestion on roads is to increase the tax on private vehicles How could this alleviate this congestion What are the measures can you suggest to deal with congestion in the cities 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 18, column 6, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ates the body but rejuvenates the mind also. Moreover, in this competitive era, eve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95901639344 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51089923099 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535519125683 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.8783680368 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.25 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177864593275 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753627473121 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408393478408 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0570881257327 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359475538707 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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