Internet social media have become very popular. To what extent do you think this is a good or bad thing? Why do you think this is the case?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
These days, cyber social networking is used by each and every one. While some people see it as a positive development, their opponents are in disagreement. As for me, Internet social media has more benefits than drawbacks, so I am strongly supportive of the former above point of view. Let me explain my position, and the reasons for the argument followed.
First, social media are an integral part of modern life. It seems to be impossible to live without Facebook, WhatsApp, Instagram or Snapchat, and this is the case especially for young people. With such a high-speed life, using social networking becomes an extremely convenient way to stay in touch with others, make new contacts, share experiences and information. Moreover, with the help of such technologies, some new professions, like a Social Network Specialist, Specialist of Marketing on Facebook, etc., have appeared and allowed many people to have a job without leaving their homes. Therefore, social media are highly beneficial to society.
On the other hand, people who continuously use social media might become addicted to them. Instead of real-live communication, many people, especially teenagers, spend hours just staring at the screens and looking at pictures of others. Also, they expect to receive a comment, a message or a 'thumb up' on their posts. Such desire happens because receiving positive feedback from someone makes a person feel happy, the same way as it happens from taking drugs. Scientists claim that every third school child is addicted to their social accounts and spends at least 10 hours a day, sending and receiving messages. It affects their education and causes health problems. Unfortunately, this issue is a significant drawback of cybersocial media.
To conclude, Internet social media should be considered as a positive development. Despite the risk of addiction, social network platforms benefit people by building their connections, transferring information, and opening new professional opportunities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, well, while, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.05785123967 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05040306326 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628099173554 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5858364124 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.1428571429 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223109361614 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856302364085 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104406965648 0.0603063233224 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124155920215 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967328571424 0.0580467560999 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.97 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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