Dear Ryan,
Hello, how are you doing? I am writing this letter to let you know that I am going on a 2 weeks holiday in japan from January 15th and I also want to ask you to look after my house during that time if it is okay for you.
Basically, there are no so many things to do but I would like you to do two little jobs for you. One is to water my small garden in the backyard. A watering can is placed right next to the outside water tap. Second is to take all newspapers that will be delivered in your place so that my mail post won’t be full. I will visit your home to get them once I come back from japan.
Here is my email address that you can contact me for just in case.
Thank you so much for your help. Looking forward to seeing you with some gifts from japan.
Your lovely neighbour XD
Jay
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ryan, Hello, how are you doing? I am writing t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 656.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.97575757576 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.86174084435 2.54303337028 73% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.921051039 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.6363636364 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383594100051 0.216113520407 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132590940421 0.0766984524023 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101191714927 0.0603063233224 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208612991383 0.12726935374 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916494844282 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.8 8.37731958763 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.21 8.71597938144 60% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.82 7.59969072165 77% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 41.2886597938 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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