Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing.
Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Despite of the fact taking adventurous sport means skatting on thin ice, this trend is becoming more and more poplular and intriguing a lot of people. In my opinion, it’s an intersting trend and I will explain why in this essay.
First of all, facing risks makes people stronger and more confident, which are crucial in both personal and professional life later. Nothing is more terrifying than the fear of death and once people can win that fear, they can overcome any challenge might happen in the future such as job lost, examination failure or financial issues, etc. Besides, confident people can communicate better and make sensible decisions in tough time. These are fundamental for success in career and build up a comfortable life.
Secondly, as many other sports, joining a high-risk sport fundamentally enhance their physical healths. It’s clear that playing sport help you reudce your body fat and control your body weight. It has proven that by running 1 hour, you are burning about 300 calos, 1/4 calos of normal people have loaded into their body everyday. As the matter of fact, the more calos you burn, the less fat content remain in your body, and the less disease caused by obesity to your health. Moreover, performing adventurous activities could help strengthening your bones by pushing your bones to the limits, accelerating the bone formation process. In fact, playing high-risk job can advance your body resitance against cancer, HIV,….
Furthermore, adventurous sport is not that “risk” if you follow the safety instruction and proffesional guidance. Indeed, if you enjoying risky activity with scrupulous preparation, fully instructed and standard health, it will be completely safe.
After all, risking your life in a dangerous sport has both positive and negative effect, but I do believe that taking part in adventurous sport is a wonderful trend because it effective has outweight it’s drawback.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to strengthen' or 'strengthen'.
Suggestion: to strengthen; strengthen
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Suggestion: , …
... your body resitance against cancer, HIV,…. Furthermore, adventurous sport is no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, after all, in fact, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23397435897 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6956004742 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644230769231 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5738165463 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.866666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212508624593 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06497938132 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0227894007408 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975091692532 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356123714823 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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