Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subjects.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is widely believed that tertiary institutions should take in the same amount of boy and girl students for each of the courses. This essay disagrees that universities should make it compulsory, the intake of equivalent boy and girl students for every course. Firstly, this essay will show that female or male students have different choices, which should respected with regards to what they want to study and secondly, this essay will argue that making it mandatory for equal amount of both sexes in every subject can be a breach of a students freewill.
Humans have choices and these should be highly considered. consequently students have their various preferences as to the subjects they want to pursue in a university. A tertiary institution making it mandatory to place equal number of both sexes in a particular course will force these students to enrol in a course that they did not envisage doing and these have negative effects on their final results in school. For instance, according to the 2018 report from the Nigerian National Union of Teachers, 90% of students who finished with a third class degree result did not study the course of their choice because of Nigerian university policy on equal portion of male and female student for every subject.
In addition, this can lead to an abuse of the free will of students. In other words, students are denied the choice of what they want to study, essentially and most students will argue that this is simply not the right and proper thing to do.
In conclusion, it is clear that universities making it mandatory to have the same proportion of male and female students in every course is a disadvantage. This is because this students have the right to choose whatever subject they like to study and it is a breach of their individual freewill.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 536, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: a student; students
...xes in every subject can be a breach of a students freewill. Humans have choices and th...
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Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Consequently
... and these should be highly considered. consequently students have their various preferences...
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Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: consequently,
... and these should be highly considered. consequently students have their various preferences...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ot the right and proper thing to do. In conclusion, it is clear that universiti...
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Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...urse is a disadvantage. This is because this students have the right to choose whate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87702265372 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58568963535 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456310679612 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.9965034181 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0909090909 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290564293895 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115692151028 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680133218207 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180535537457 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559792796808 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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