Due to the coronavirus, all schools have been closed, making both students and teachers use electronic devices to study online. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? Write an essay of at least 250 words to support your arguments.
Nowadays, one of the pendemics, coronavirus has been spreading throughout the world, accordingly, academic institutes are closed it makes pupiles and educators to use electronic gizmos to study online. it has many merits and demerits, which I will have discussed in further paragraphs.
On the one hand, presently, most of the countries of the earth are suffering from coronavirus. so, many nations have applied lockdown; article 188 -- in which, all the gathering places : malls, cinemas, railway stations, airports, holy places, school; colleges; many more. On account of this situation students and teachers utilize digital platform to learn. there are two major advantages: convenience ; flaxibility, students can learn at their own place where they want and any time , they do not need any material while studing and their mind easily catch up important poins. learners and educators can make a schedule to daily study upon meeting applications. For an example, teacher can teach students some mobile applications and record a video and share it: zoom, facebook, youtube and so on.
On the other hand there are some disadvantages to study online while academic institutes are suttdown, some students does not have mobile phone so, they are not able to learn online. some learners can not understand and concentrate easily and affects physically . For an instance, mobile rays not only affects eyes but also makes blood clots in mind.
To conclude, advantages of online study by electric gadgets is convenience and flexibility and it effects upon eyes and mind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34817813765 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79077176234 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663967611336 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2269156484 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.083333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203539623982 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659738721071 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422558115332 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116910067058 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273149041488 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.