The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that technical knowledge has given boon to resolve the crime easily and leading to decrease in numbers. I strongly agree to this opinion as automation of the police system has helped in resolving most critical cases in fraction of seconds.
First of all, it has been observed not only the technological innovations aids in solving the crime quickly but also helped in maintain vast data of criminals. It is often seen although policemen try their best to get hold of criminals, they fail due to inadequate evidence. The law enforcement agency now act fast because of the automated system available to resolve cases quickly. For instance, traffic police holding technical device against measuring the speed of over speeding vehicle has contributed in reduced rates of accidents. Provided that the usage of CCTV cameras and GPS has supported in tracking the location of law breakers. Hence, digitalization of the criminal records and other important data about crimes across the globe has enabled the state authorities to track the offenders.
Secondly, the law agencies are benefited by the use of robotics whenever required to stop crime before it gets executed. Also, the usage of video conferencing has saved the time of commuting and taking decision in coordination. The terrorism has been reduced by the use of technology. For example, in the latest act where the bomb got diffused in Jammu and Kashmir as the forces got the information by tracing Interpol. Thus, the advancement in the technical aspects has always played a vital role in stopping crime.
To recapitulate, I would say in order to solve plethora of cases lying under files from last many years, it is necessary to make the system automated rather doing task manually.. It will allow solving the cases with fewer efforts and more brain.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07947019868 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.724471438 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62582781457 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7798040805 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.266666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160211705907 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440363433581 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431128189242 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843611290354 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158462952362 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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