A lot of money is spent on repairing old buildings. Instead of repairing old buildings that money should be spent on knocking down old buildings and building new ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
While, there is a contradiction in renovation of old buildings, the best way to utilize less money is to demolish and build the new one. To be very precise, I strongly believe that old structures should be replaced with the new one.
First of all, it has been observed that there are plethora of ancient buildings that falls automatically without proper preservation leading to deaths and damage to society. Although some structure are so old, it can fall down any time. An immediate attention should be taken to rectify it. With the involvement of newly constructed societies the maintenance gets distributed among the people. For example, in the year 2019 a four storied old building in Mumbai collapsed leading to 11 deaths and 40 trapped. This accident would have avoided if proper alimentation would had been taken from builder. Thus, it is important to keep an eye on aged building and demolish it when required to avoid high cost in fixing it.
Secondly, I believe that reconstruction of building in place of old one is more beneficial as it gives new interior with more benefits and compatible way of living in today’s era. With the increased demand of place to live in moreover in metro cities, it’s better to construct a new property instead. New houses not only gives more space to live in but also involves less maintenance. With the advancement of technology like different paints used that keeps the walls of houses secure for years. Also, Modern buildings implement sustainable design, adopt clean energy saving costs and increasing tenant occupancy. For instance, nowadays people prefer to buy apartments but with Interpol connections, Lift facilities, park view, and servant’s quarter. Therefore, it is seen that building new houses in place of old gives might give more profit in terms of rent.
To recapitulate, I would rather say that newly constructed building provides all kind of amenities with reduced cost of all types of maintenance as its gets distributed in terms of society maintenance cost.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 572, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08358208955 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83760195444 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9561904591 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.176470588 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7058823529 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274771760734 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861135355123 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770154887881 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175663285743 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951345335478 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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