The impact of the growing demand of more flights has had on the environment is a major concern for many countries. Some people believe that one way to limit the number of people travelling by air is to increase tax on flights.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is often argued that more want of flights has an impact on the environment and it can be reduced if heavy taxes are levied on it. I strongly disagree with this opinion as levying taxes is not only the way to reduce air pollution as increased number of international and domestic flights has contributed a lot in the air pollution.
First of all, I believe that due to the ease of travelling through aero planes has now contributed in decreasing the quality of air. People can now afford to travel through air that was really not simple a few years back. In order to balance, there is a need to increase the cost of aviation fuel that in turn will increase operating cost of flights and tickets will be sold at higher rates. For example, affluent people can buy tickets for international travel but will restrict themselves travelling now and then. Furthermore, it will be seen that domestic travelling through flights will decrease and will lead to reduced pollutant in the air. Thus, this will combat the pollution effects and creates a scope to develop alternative transport system for inland travel.
Secondly, in order to keep the air free from all sort of pollution due to fuel it is also important to keep an eye on the design of the aeroplane. Now it has been observed that the vertical tail of the aeroplane has been reduced in order to use less fuel. For instance, it is reported in media that electric aircrafts produce 20% lower emission levels per passenger compared to fuel-run models. Therefore, it will lead to reduced air pollution with alternative methods to be used.
To recapitulate, I would emphasize on using the alternative sources for air travel so as to limitize the pollution caused due to fuel.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 84, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... the alternative sources for air travel so as to limitize the pollution caused due to fu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, sort of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76411960133 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68191722327 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518272425249 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2352223329 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.307692308 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210508110821 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785547987456 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528828624 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129414444982 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711711309361 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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