You are working for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager.
In your letter, you should:
• describe why you want to take the course
• explaining how it will be beneficial to company
• tell who will be managing your work in your absence
Dear John,
I am writing this letter to inform you about one of the project management professional training course available online by the institute named Simplilearn. As I am from projects background, so I found it to be value adding to my current position. It not only makes you learn effective stakeholder management, but also resource management and also gives high revenue to the company.
Let me explain you in detail, the domain I am talking about allows the opportunity to cut off on extra time and resources used and help in saving costs. There are several technical aspects and methodologies like Kaizen and Six Sigma that teaches how to keep an employee motivated and engaged in the phenomenon. Moreover, a guidance is given how to retain the work. While, entering into a brand name, gives the path to represent an organization name in top list, in earning chunk amount. However, it can only be possible if I get trained on the parameters.
Therefore, I will be taking these classes for 2 hours daily. Though the professional guide requires 32 hours of classes in a month, can be managed in weekends as well. I will leave early and will allocate the rest of the task to my subordinate in order to avoid the work getting hampered on weekdays. Also, the workload is less at the end of the day, I will keep myself available in case of urgency. It would be grateful, if you allow me to go for it.
Hopefully, you will pay immediate attention to it.
Best Regards,
Urvashi
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-07-16 | urvashi saxena | 89 | view |
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- The impact of the growing demand of more flights has had on the environment is a major concern for many countries Some people believe that one way to limit the number of people travelling by air is to increase tax on flights To what extent do you agree or 67
- Many animals are being hunted to the brink of extinction in order to fulfill the demand and greed of mankind for decorative purposes as well as for other reasons such as traditional medicine How can this issue be tackled 78
- The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime Do you agree or disagree 79
- In many countries government like to spend more money on arts Some people agree with this However others think government should spend more on health and education Discuss both the sides and give your opinion 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 937.175257732 132% => OK
No of words: 261.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74329501916 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75240892796 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647509578544 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 290.88556701 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2309092528 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5333333333 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301071184351 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831378596876 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603414061157 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165818479822 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289675514069 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 41.2886597938 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.