In recent times, majority of the nation is experiencing a surge in the juvenile delinquency. Although many people believe that this results from the aggression and brutality shown in the media, I think this is not the sole cause for such negative trend. In my opinion, lack of parental guidance and increase in the number of broken families also play a key role in juvenile offences that can be easily tackled by the under mentioned solutions.
To begin with, tendency to commit crimes is relatively higher in teenagers who have been deprived of parental support. This is because parents are usually the closest person to an adolescent, which empowers them with the ability to shape and mold their children’s life in the best possible way. A recent study published in the Time magazine reported that teenagers brought up in a close-knit family are less likely to go astray. Another potential cause for the escalation of juvenile crime is the increase in the number of dysfunctional families. In other words, children belonging to such families undergo traumatic experience which imprints them on their mind that hostile behaviour is the only solution for all problems. Even though violence in the media is responsible for manipulating youth to commit crimes to some extent, the role of parents and families cannot be overlooked.
To combat this issue, two effective solutions can be implemented. Firstly, parents need to strengthen their bonds with their offspring. The reason for this is that the more parents spend time with their children, the less are the chances for them to deviate from the path of righteousness. Since children emulate what they see, parents can become a role model for them to instill important virtues into them. Another method to deal with this problem would be to ensure proper rehabilitation for the children of the broken families. To elaborate, counseling therapy would be able to aid such children from becoming a prey to mental derangements, which, in turn, transform them into a potential juvenile offender. Therefore, rehabilitation therapy is useful for depletion of under-age offences.
In conclusion, I think that in addition to violence in the media, deprivation of parental support and toxic familial environment can be attributed to increase in the offences by youngsters. By spending quality time with children and provisioning rehabilitation support, this problem can be mitigated to some degree.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, so, still, then, therefore, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2060.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2417302799 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88468154959 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531806615776 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 651.6 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4676379385 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.444444444 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282202075764 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898798563372 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527665211412 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179392483745 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192214315418 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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