Some people think visitors to others countries should imitate local customs and behaviour. Some people disagree;they think the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss the two views and give your opinion.
There is no denying the fact that,local culture and behaviour are the roots of local residents.Some people beleive that tourists from other countries should copy these cultural values as well as behaviour. While, others think that it is not necessary to do such things and the host country should welcome the cultural differences. However, i will go with the latter view. In this essay, i will discuss both views along with my opinion and relevany examples in upcoming paragraph.
To commence with, some persons disagree from this notion. Primarily, they beleive that "Guest is GOD". It is totally depend on the visitors whether they want to adapt the native country culture or not because sometimes the tourists are not interested in copy their life-style. For example, if the foriegn visitors are comfortable in t-shirts and jeans then they will not wearing the traditional clothes. The other reason is we can not force someone to imitate others people as it is based on the everyone's personal choice. Last but not the least , the host country tourists are not the permanent residents. So,it is the responsibility of the local people to welcome their culture and adapt the differences.
On the other hand, native country people want that visitors should adapt their culture because of these reasons. The predominant is eradicate the cultural differences. They think the tourists imitate their style of eating, clothing, as well as the life -style. By doing these things , local residents beleive that they become successful in withdraw the discrimination. Secondly, local individuals beleive that if the abroad visitors copy their culture, then it will lead to enhance their cultural values and everybody wants to imitate their customs. For instance, tourists celebrate their festivals ,wearing the traditional clothes etectera.
To conclude, after having deep insight on both methodologies, i think that although tourists adapt the customs of native country but it is also important for the local residents to greet the cultural differences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34461538462 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7623668871 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489230769231 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.659364365 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0555555556 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374153443937 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108670848649 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793821180289 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228612074416 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742467539244 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.