Some people think that having a set of retirement age(eg 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?
There appears to be no unanimous decision on what should be the appropriate age to retire from government jobs. But there is a clarion call that preventing people to work beyond the golden age of 65 years, whatever the job may be, is unjust and that certain workers should retire early and enjoy the requisite emoluments. I disagree with this view but I will make recommendations about workers that should be considered for retirement before the golden age.
It is not debatable that workers should retire at one time or the other. It is therefore fair that a specific age is set in stone as the age to retire regardless of job everyone contributes equally to the development of the society. This will stand as a reference for impartial governance. For instance, it is part of the job process that each worker is informed from the outset that 65 years is the age of retirement in Nigeria. If some jobs enjoy early retirement with the required benefits, it will be tantamount to injustice and will worsen the social class issues in society. Therefore, it seems logical to agree on a certain age as the retirement age.
Without mincing words, military officers, who defend and protect the state from terror should retire early. Furthermore, medical doctors, lawyers and business entrepreneurs in public service should enjoy early retirement because these workers are essential in the private set up rather than the public establishments where there is often a glut of them.
In conclusion, I disagree with the said unfairness of having a particular age of retirement. Some essential workers such as doctors, military officers and entrepreneurs, however, deserve to leave public service earlier than others with their full benefits paid.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05555555556 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82224819542 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8294117473 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350251516825 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135964596199 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071619146815 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199149841455 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845371994266 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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