Some people think that having a set retirement age (65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an early age.
In the recent decades, everyone has to be grow along with a robust foundation and an enormous shine in their career. Some people would argue that a fixed retirement age for all professionals is unacceptable. I completely agree with this view. In this essay, benefits from elderly population and requirement of retirement and pension will be investigated.
To begin with, there are job sectors which regardless of physical strength of work force such as education, political, research etc. Such are not required a body stamina instead the predominated factors a sophisticated knowledge and long-lasting notions are undue important. Since many of older people have a tremendous knowledge than their counterparts, they can effectively handle the critical circumstance with either themselves or even just through a small fraction of advice to the young equivalent. Scientist, for instance, even though a great deal of power hold by the government, it nevertheless put afford to stop researches and investigation that are produced at the age of over 65 by them. The reason behind the strategy is it can be grown with successful economic and education status. As a result, neither authorities have made an effort to control the retirement age of those people.
On the other hand, some jobs are highly depended on physical strength of workmen. Although over age of 65 has adequate experience and expertise, they cannot effort to work as young people. With regards of policeman who engage with physical and brain related-activities at the entire job, must not be handle by after the age of 65. Moreover, they need to spend their precious time with their family along with pension at least at the last part of their lives.
To conclude, each human-being requires to live with their undue important matter. Whether they could be retired or not, is extremely depends on the sector of work rather than the age of them. A fixed age retirement should not be implicated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'tremendous knowledge'.
Suggestion: tremendous knowledge
...ortant. Since many of older people have a tremendous knowledge than their counterparts, they can effec...
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Line 7, column 40, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'living'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: living
... To conclude, each human-being requires to live with their undue important matter. Whet...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, nevertheless, so, as to, at least, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1214953271 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96434101778 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591900311526 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9525104645 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7058823529 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237490722488 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803549566847 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072617037255 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15353150764 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0105715927983 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.