Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of job should be highly paid?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Entertainment is the form of activity which grab the attention of viewers or audience to gives pleasure and happiness. The most famous entertainers such as film stars sports stars pop musicians paid too much money because they do work hard to reach at this stage and earn fame, money as well as million of fans. on the other hand,their should be highly paid job of surgeon,dentist physicians, orthodontist,IT experts, software engineers, as well as corporate lawyers.
By proceeding the statement, this is an argumentative essay, in both types celebrities have significant role for the happiness of people and they give own tough time to their respective field. First i am in favor of entertainers, they have to paid too much due to some reasons, for instance they face lot of troubles in the start of their careers and then get fame and million of loved ones and became super hero, many of fans started to consider them as an ideal person and when they perform some moral performances in front of them they pick the point instantly and follow it in this way they deliver important message.
Secondly many other highest paid jobs are all around the world where people can earn more and more such as surgeons,char tarted accountant, IT professional, physicians, engineers etc. They also give hardest time to serve the people and save them from troubles or difficulties.
In conclusion, in the world of entertainment celebrities should paid too much, on the other hand Government should paid much more many other expertise, specialist in their fields by checking the passion and work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...s stage and earn fame, money as well as million of fans. on the other hand,their should...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...fame, money as well as million of fans. on the other hand,their should be highly p...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , their
...ll as million of fans. on the other hand,their should be highly paid job of surgeon,de...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , dentist
...eir should be highly paid job of surgeon,dentist physicians, orthodontist,IT experts, so...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , IT
...surgeon,dentist physicians, orthodontist,IT experts, software engineers, as well as...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...h time to their respective field. First i am in favor of entertainers, they have ...
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Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
... of their careers and then get fame and million of loved ones and became super hero, ma...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , char
... can earn more and more such as surgeons,char tarted accountant, IT professional, phy...
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Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'give the hardest'.
Suggestion: give the hardest
...l, physicians, engineers etc. They also give hardest time to serve the people and save them ...
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Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun expertise seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much other expertise', 'a good deal of other expertise'.
Suggestion: much other expertise; a good deal of other expertise
...r hand Government should paid much more many other expertise, specialist in their fields by checking...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00754716981 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8862867975 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596226415094 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.4332227267 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.875 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.125 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.75 7.06120827912 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292078414639 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125140080801 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765858407736 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181715293076 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0936641463362 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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