Many people think that zoos are cruel. Others think they are helpful in protecting rare animals. discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Zoos are considered a place for entertainment. Although some people object to keeping animals in zoos, many believe that zoos are a way to safeguard endangered animals. I believe that keeping animals in captivity is not ethical and zoos need to be closed down at the earliest.
One the one hand, zoos are viewed as a place to conserve endangered species. The urban development takes its toll on the natural habitat of a wealth of rare animals. In other words, the more residential areas expand, the more logging and deforestation happen. Moreover, illegal poaching poses considerable risks to indigenous animals. As a result, it is vital to offer wildlife sanctuaries to those species that are on the verge of extinction. Take African elephants as a salient example; not only are their native habitat is being threatened, but also, they are still being poached in large numbers for their tusks.
On the flip side, the ethics of keeping animals in captivity is in question. Many wild animals including endangered species in captivity, such as elephants live their lives in chains, unable to display any natural roaming behaviour or move beyond a few meters. Even though some wild animals might not be safe in wildlife, the restrictions posed on their instinct may cause self-harm due to constant confinement. Captive wild animals also suffer from cruel mutilation with their teeth and claws cut back. To make the matters worse, many terrified animals such as pigs, chickens, rabbits, and cows drop into the enclosures of starving lions or tigers, for the entertainment of crowds.
All in all, keeping animals in zoos go hand in hand with many merits and demerits. Despite its utmost importance in preserving wild animals, restricting them in cramped living conditions can cause a wealth of problems for animals as in self-harm. Additionally, not all animals are treated well in zoos. Many individuals, including me, criticize zoos’ existence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 278, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...need to be closed down at the earliest. One the one hand, zoos are viewed as a p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16719242902 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79488147113 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589905362776 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0158239618 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6111111111 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164738199983 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521545096575 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346021701801 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101816331478 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031340267867 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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