Some people beleive that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet . Others however beleive that government should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Duscuss both view and your opinion.
There is no denying the fact that, in the contemporary era, health become the major issue. Some people ponder that individuals should take care of their healthy diet. While, others think that it is the responsibility of officials to make sure that their residents take a balanced diet. However, I will go with the former view. Im this essay, I will discuss both view along with my opinion and relevant examples in upcoming paragraph.
To commence with, some viewers beleive that individuals are the best to take care of their own health because of these reasons. The predominant is humans know theirselve better as compared to others. Each and every person make the diet chart according to their like and dislikes. Secondly, if the person can not maintain their healthy life-style then they will suffer from various infections such as gastrointestinal, respiratory etectera . For instance, junk food not only affect the physical but mental health also. Moreover, individuals make their own time-table according to their comfort level and priorities. So, they make an appropriate time for eating, drinking, sleeping etectera.
On the other hand, some masses think that authority should take responsibility regarding their residents. Primarily, they should held the health check-ups camp in society to examine the people whether they take the balanced diet or not. Apart from this, officials should ban the unhealthy food. For example, if junk cuisines are not available then masses are not able to eat these kind of items.Lastly, some viewers beleive that government should provide healthy diet to poor people because they are not able to afford healthy food.
To conclude, after having a deep insight on both methodologies, I think that although officials should have some role in manage the better life style of their citizens but if humans do not have encouragement and interest to maintain their health then it will be impossible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, lastly, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, while, apart from, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22435897436 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73308071977 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560897435897 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5779852981 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8823529412 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0588235294 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.494858477197 0.244688304435 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142981984862 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122245686778 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282866277097 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608933589461 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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