Some people think that the role of parents is to discipline their children and teach them about right and wrong. Other people consider that the main responsibility of parents is to nurture their children and provide them with a safe environment to grow up in. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
There is no denying the fact that, parents plays an indispensable role in their children life.Some people ponder that it is the responsibility of mother and father to teach their kids about right or wrong and discipline. However, others think that it is role of parents to take care of their offspring as well as provide them a safe environment for the growth.In this eassay , I will elucidate both views along with my opinion and relevant examples in upcoming paragraph.
To commence with, it is the role of parents to teach their childrem about regulation and moral values due to these reasons. The predominant is mother amd father are the first teacher of youngsters. The child can learn ethics from their parents. For instance, kids acquire skills about their cultural values , their tradition and learn to greet their relatives according to their culture.Secondly, discipline is the thing that juvinile learn from mother and father. they regulate their actions and make the schedule for every thing such as hand washing , time to eat and drink etectera.Thirdly, they grab knowlegde about the things and become a good human being.
On the other hand, some persons beleive that the parents responsibility is to nurture their child and provide shelter to them. Primarily, childern are prone to accident because of their mischievous nature. For example, parents take care of their kids that they can not go near to fire, stairs etectera and prevent them from domestic accidents. Apart from this, parents provide the good environment to youngsters as these things are beneficial for the child growth.
To conclude, I thought that both have own importance and no one can irrefutable its benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, apart from, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10791366906 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76533294075 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568345323741 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3401312141 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.333333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406732945888 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138779810075 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112975037066 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221115960866 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154705446383 0.056905535591 272% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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