some people think that killing animals for food is cruel, but others claim that animals are necessary part of diet.
Animals are beautiful creation of God. However, there are predominantly two contrasting views where one section of society vehemently deems that slaughtering animals for appetite is brutal while others emphasize that it is indispensable for healthy living. However, in my contention, animal's diet has its own pros and cons.
Apparently, consumption of animals holds a wide range of constructive benefits for humans. First and foremost, animal’s flesh contains a predominant nutrient which is protein resulting in prolific increase of good health of a person. Seemingly, doctors sometimes recommend the intake of fish which substantially contribute to an exponential rise in level of protein. Secondly, Is eating animals considered immoral? Certainly No. Western countries are majorly non-vegetarians which is an outcome of their culture and geographical conditions. Consequently, people who have the habit of consuming animal's flesh are reluctant to change their diet. Thirdly, eating animals act as a key influencing factor in adequately meeting the hunger of alarming population. The classification of vegetarians and non- vegetarians have declined the burden on producers to produce more. Henceforth, countries are being protected from epidemic of hunger. According to BBC, a recent study revealed in UK that people who rely on animals flesh have considerably contributed 60% in procuring other foods for remaining population.
On the destructive [part, some believes that intake of animals is not favourable for myriad reasons. Chiefly, although animals are eaten worldwide as basic food, they do have the right to survive and being part of earth they are of paramount significance for ecological balance. Moreover, slaughtering animals for food have resulted in potential problems in humans related to health. Subsequently, people are suffering from detrimental effects of cardiac and digestive diseases. To corroborate, in the past decade humans have confronted life threatening diseases caused by consuming animals such as bud flu, swine flu and cancer also. In addition to this, despite fulfilling human hunger, some species are on the edge of extinction which is a threat to ecosystem of mother earth. Conspicuously, the disturbance can lead to catastrophic effect on environment due to which people will not be able to reap the benefit of balanced atmosphere. To vindicate, extinction of fishes from water will resultantly give a prolific increase in solid matter found in water and can lead to severe water pollution.
Suffice to say, modernization and westernization is to be blamed for this increasing trend among people. This phenomenon brings about a mixed bag of both boon and bane for individuals. On the brighter side, animals fulfill the hunger and provide rich nutrients to the populace while on the darker side, it has some inherited downsides of giving up their lives by being immoral and a harrowing effect on environment is caused which cannot be overlooked.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: as well
...s such as bud flu, swine flu and cancer also. In addition to this, despite fulfillin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2531.0 1615.20841683 157% => OK
No of words: 459.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51416122004 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11603663481 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 176.041082164 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59477124183 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 805.5 506.74238477 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8453228363 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.458333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04166666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315451957571 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888382307078 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726226932545 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187445557105 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567732714012 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 157.0 78.4519038076 200% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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