When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration for many. Others, however, prefer different other aspects of a job over the salary they earn. In your opinion what are the most important aspects of a job?
While selecting a livelihood, it is considered by many that earning is the most prominent aspect for them. Although, some people believe that other facet of an occupation, such as contribution to society, is more valuable over the money. I firmly agree with the latter view that a job should be passion oriented to satisfy the interest of the people.
Admittedly, money plays a vital role in shaping the lifestyle of individuals. Firstly, high salary shows the extreme power and the esteem position of a person in society. Secondly, some people claim that wage leads to the motivation at work, the motivation further leads to hard work, and ultimately, hard work helps in making more money. As a result, salary supports a person in having another feather in the cap.
However, I believe that a job without enthusiasm is waste of time at the workplace. Firstly, Salary merely has a role in making jobs thoroughly interesting because interest comes after satisfaction and happiness. Additionally, money has nothing to do with happiness, else all rich people must be happy today, but this is not all true. For example, according to a recent survey practiced in India, it revealed that more people leave high paying jobs for establishing their own startup due to dissatisfaction in the existing occupation. Although starting a business initially demands huge investments over low profit, yet it is in the trend owing to flexibility and passion in work area as per individual's choice.
Some people like to work for society for free, particularly the social workers in the NGOs. The aim of such people is to make society a happy place to live, for everyone. Furthermore, upon seeing others happy make them glad and proud too. For instance, Mother Teresa devoted her full life in the service of others. She always believed in simplicity and spirituality, rather money.
To conclude, However, while I believe that a considerable amount of wage is needed by people to make the living more comfortable, I agree that the happiness, internal satisfaction, and interest in the work area are the crucial parameters to consider the task.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean ''?
...th the latter view that a job should be passion oriented to satisfy the interest of the...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04815864023 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8458991754 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56657223796 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8548970145 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.823529412 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7647058824 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165550014269 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513256304661 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492103885505 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884046706316 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666904810354 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean ''?
...th the latter view that a job should be passion oriented to satisfy the interest of the...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04815864023 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8458991754 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56657223796 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8548970145 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.823529412 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7647058824 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165550014269 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513256304661 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492103885505 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884046706316 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666904810354 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.