A country becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes a mixture of nationalities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed by many that a nation grows faster when different nationalities stay together. However, while I agree that it has some detrimental effect on a society, I firmly believe it is good for individual person because it provides a pivotal opportunity in adaptation habits to various cultures.
To begin with, coexistence of different people from all over the world give a mixture of cultures such as lifestyles and cuisines. With regards to individual person, the tolerance power of an individual person towards the several mindsets are gradually fostered by this dissimilar cultures. Such people adapt themselves more easily in busineses and trades which require utmost respect and acceptance of every persons according to their cultures. Moreover, the generation in such a country becomes more versatile and adaptable toward the diverse arena of life. For example, India is a secular country for all religions and cultures. More than ten religions, hundred languages, and various Intercontinental foods and costumes are coexisting here. The equal right of living for all is binded by the harmony and peace.
Admittedly, polytony in cultures cause the social unrest and injustice in a society and country. Firstly, predominant culture leads to the hatred and anger toward the minority culture groups, which ultimately, resulting in the ethnic conflict and civil unrest in a community. Following this, a country may lose its original and Unique Identity culture altogether. For instance, recent case of "black lives matter" in the United States of America has basked the riots by the people of African-American society.
To conclude, despite having severe chaos in a nation due to multi-culture outlooks, it adds many positive attributes to an individual person, particularly, adaptability, tolerance, acceptance, and respect toward several cultures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 658, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
... and cultures. More than ten religions, hundred languages, and various Intercontinental...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56643356643 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05275793646 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618881118881 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8381625475 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.714285714 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112304486506 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401898975578 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439972294434 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0585298617672 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035291952333 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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