Forests produce fresh oxygen and participate in regulating climate. But every year tree cover of our planet is lessening due to deforestation.
What are the primary causes of deforestation?
To what results may it lead?
Forest are the lungs of the Earth, which provide fresh air and stabilize our climate. However, annually the natural defense of our planet is disappearing as forests Danish. This essay will examine the reasons and the consequences of deforestation.
There are two main reasons, in my opinion, why more and more trees are cutting down these days. First of all, logging industry leads to the lost of forests. Because wood is a raw material for an array of product such as paper, household appliances. Secondly, the lack of spaces may result in deforestation. With the explosion of population, forests have been replaced by department blocks. Besides that, a lot of new economic zones are established in areas where used to be home of nature.
Deforestation has already had huge damaging impacts. Firstly, it may lead to the loss of biodiversity. In fact, a lot of plants and animals are endangered and also became extinct because of the disappearance of their habitats. Secondly, forests are lungs of our planet so when you cut down its air cell, the climate might be affected. Nowadays, the Earth is hotter day to day and the weather is unstable. For instance, the temperature in Ha Noi can reach more than 40 [o] C in the summer that had never happened before. Moreover, there is a dramatical rise in air pollution due to the exhausted fumes from various sources such as vehicles, factories without replacing with oxygen from the photosynthesis process in trees.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for deforestation, and it lead to various negative consequences on our planet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
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Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, as for, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95910780669 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89848418952 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628252788104 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.191436407 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4705882353 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8235294118 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35294117647 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16803097263 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470644007091 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423976985257 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955910919376 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224584304618 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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