You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town.
Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inquire about the purchase of some electrical goods from your shop.I am a resident in nearby village.I have come to know from a friend of mine that your shop has some of the best electronic goods in this locality
I am looking to buy Laptop with a configuration of 8 GB RAM, 1 TB space with the latest windows version.Also, Keyboard, Bluetooth enabled speakers and a microphone. As I am an online tutor these are essential for me, and looking to buy superior quality items as my existing ones are in a bad position. Could you help me if these are available in your store or can you place an order for the same.
It would be great if you can send me the details of the variants and prices for the same. Likewise, wanted to check how many days can you hold the goods for me.
Thanks for assisting in the process.
Yours faithfully,
Sumanth
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...of some electrical goods from your shop.I am a resident in nearby village.I have ...
^
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... shop.I am a resident in nearby village.I have come to know from a friend of mine...
^
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... shop.I am a resident in nearby village.I have come to know from a friend of mine...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...st electronic goods in this locality I am looking to buy Laptop with a configu...
^
Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...B space with the latest windows version.Also, Keyboard, Bluetooth enabled speakers a...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44512195122 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52591417416 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646341463415 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.767702519 44.8134815571 278% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 104.142857143 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217813219914 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085631404866 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661591629361 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112316636613 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714512222074 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 8.62886597938 324% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...of some electrical goods from your shop.I am a resident in nearby village.I have ...
^
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... shop.I am a resident in nearby village.I have come to know from a friend of mine...
^
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... shop.I am a resident in nearby village.I have come to know from a friend of mine...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...st electronic goods in this locality I am looking to buy Laptop with a configu...
^
Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...B space with the latest windows version.Also, Keyboard, Bluetooth enabled speakers a...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44512195122 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52591417416 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646341463415 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 124.767702519 44.8134815571 278% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 104.142857143 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217813219914 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085631404866 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661591629361 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112316636613 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714512222074 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 8.62886597938 324% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.