Museums and art galleries should concentrate on local works rather than showing the cultures or artworks from other countries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often considered by many that museums and art exhibits are needed to focus more on the local work. However, I disagree with this viewpoint. While I agree that local art gallery is important to enhance the knowledge of young people, I also believe that overseas artworks are equally important to encourage society to take an interest in origin of world.
To begin, with regards to home country culture, it is important to educate adults about the rich history of their own country because nowadays pupils are more interested in future rather in past. With upgradation in technology, community is somewhere losing its culture of rich history. As a result, it leads to a disjointed and fragmented society in a whole, where people are not connected to their Chronicles. Moreover, knowing the local art is helpful in creating interest in the subject topic of history, which cannot be provided by the classroom theory. Young children develop more quickly when exposed to the reality, and hence, a regular visits to museum help in fostering them. For example, recently, private schools in India are practising frequent visits to art galleries owing to children's interest and enhancement in practical knowledge.
On the other hand , overseas arts and works are also vital to gather useful skills because it helps in opening the doors of opportunity worldwide. Such person who has liking toward others country history and its origins are likely to be more adaptable and tolerant toward others culture and people. In addition, knowing foreign country Civilization also brings curiosity of learning foreign languages and lifestyles, which may be useful to hold a living in foreign country. For instance, presently Museums in Rome are offering jobs to people based on their knowledge in history of Rome rather Geographic area constrain, and therefore, one of my friend has been placed in the Colosseum Museum of Rome.
To conclude, local museums and arts play pivotal role in joining a community and promoting its history and culture, whereas foreign country art displays and graphics are equally important in creating global opportunities such as jobs, learning foreign languages, and lifestyles. Hence, I believe that showcase of other nations artworks are also essential.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, while, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23835616438 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69111674762 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545205479452 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6383172875 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.466666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223852523683 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696069342567 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394753002801 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141941561046 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350415618379 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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