It is better for children to grow up in country side than in large city.
Children's holistic development is more determined where they grow up. Society and environment are the major factors which plays vital role to develop their mental state. Some people believe that village life is beneficial for the children for their better growth because of clean and peaceful environment. But I concurred with the idea that children acquire more opportunity in city areas like learning different culture and society along with to be familiar with new technology. I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraph.
To begin with, in big cities there are numbers of school and parents have opportunity to select among them and they can choose the best school for their children which helps children to get better education and learning. But in village, there may not be ample school and youths do not have choices. I have to admit that my opinion has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. Around ten years, when I was in sixth standard, I used to study in my village. But there were only five teachers to handle eight classes and they were amateur. They used to neither provide homework nor teach well. So my parents decided to send me in big city for my seventh grade where I got chance to use library, science lab and participate in extra curricular activities. As a result, I progressed in my education and scored the highest marks in my high school that influenced me to major in science in university.
Secondly, Children adopt different culture and society which ease them to dead with different ethnic groups and society. On the other hand, it encourages for diversity in society and create friendly behavior among neighborhood. On the contrary, in rural areas, children do not get chance to interact with many people and when they come to city area, they become unable to make friends as they do not have exposure and they find themselves isolated.
Thirdly, in urban area, children have access to be familiar with new technologies. furthermore, they know more about new inventions than the children from village. Consequently, they upgrade themselves according to job market. As a result, they obtain better position than the children from village who do not have abundant sources like them.
To sum up, it is better to rare up children in city rather than village because of more facilities like new technology, better schools, different culture and society and many more which are not easily available in village.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2066.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0145631068 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62815103597 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521844660194 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2694345104 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.380952381 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.619047619 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52380952381 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228224192377 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646060328957 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750969900577 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147597257302 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625757936523 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.