In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
The value placed on home owning differ from Nation to Nation. Although in some countries, people may prefer to own their own homes, other Nations may have their citizenry opt for renting. The former is a beneficial trend and the rationale behind choosing to purchase a home will be discussed in this essay.
To begin with, there are numerous reasons why possessing a home seems crucial, the most significant of which is the relative affordability of houses in the long run. This means that through mortgage facilities, houses can be bought and the balance paid out in small instalments over a long period of time. To exemplify this, a recent survey on housing in Southern USA showed that the average monthly house mortgage payment was $300, which is considerably lower than the median monthly rent of $750. Besides, the mortgager looks forward to being in full possession of the house at the end of the repayment period. These, so far, are arguably the reasons why some people find purchasing a home a better decision than renting.
Furthermore, some individuals find it important to own a home for the sake of posterity. Bringing this down to the family as a unit, parents are increasingly making conscious efforts to leave possessions for their children, and a home is considered on of the most valuable inheritance since its value usually appreciates over time. For example, Nigerian men usually view bequeathing a home to their children as a measure of a father’s success. Thus, it may be more logical to own than rent a home.
In conclusion, owning a home is regarded highly by some humans for different reasons such as long-term relative affordability and posterity purposes. This seems to be a positive upturn as its cons, if any, do not hold water in the light of the various pros enumerated in this essay.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, look, may, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87741935484 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74739494435 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574193548387 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1344689507 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316116115532 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10872211058 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535962182422 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191679541715 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301729998115 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.